Congratulation on your first jam submission!
Very neat story game i played -
like others mentioned, the call to actions with the arrows took a bit to understand, i almost closed the game because i thought it crashed and wanted to restart.
Also i'd suggest keeping to one art style, either pencil drawn or pc drawn, either is fine although i liked the pc-drawn visuals, such as the dialog portraits better.
Good job on finishing and good luck on the ratings!