I just finished reading through this and... wow. It was a lot. Your writing is beautiful. I loved seeing the narration just tell me what all the different characters were doing at that given time... and I loved the focus on many different characters, seeing their lives intertwine in interesting ways. I also want to shout out the scene where Argo and Nessa do acid together. That was beautiful; not just the way you wrote it, but also the sort of visual overlay you put over the scene for the fractals and stuff. There's so much going on in this one, I don't know what else to say other than amazing work. I feel hollowed out by it all (positive).
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hehehe thank you! the "small update enumeration on all characters" thing is a device I straight up lifted from Guide by Dennis Cooper, and it actually also helped me keep the plot straight during development lmao. I'm glad you liked it :3
Shoutout to The psychedelic anomaly on godotshaders for the acid overlay
I thank you for feeling hollowed out (positive) <3