This was absolutely beautiful... this sort of writing always warms my heart and lifts my spirits!
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Excellent stuff right here, maybe my favorite work of yours so far! The visuals are great; I love how simple the portraits and visuals are of the pilots, compared to the CGI look of the metalbodies. Very stylish and cool! The character writing is so good; the shifting perspectives throughout the story kept me really hooked, and it was interesting to see at times the same event from two different perspectives (like Blue and Purple in the shower). Purple's scenes were a real highlight; seeing their sheer sexual frustration was entertaining but also kind of horrifying because... that's a really awful situation to be in!
Also I need to just say that I love Blue so much omg... I want to give her a hug!! And show her my own blue bunny plush cause we totally match <3
The style here is just amazing, in terms of both visual and audio. And while the unique visuals are impressive enough, your writing once again has really managed to grip me. It gets right into the pit of my stomach, you know? I want Cadence to be okay... I'm looking forward to the final version of this. Best of luck finishing it! ^^
This was awesome!! The presentation here is great; having that small window below the main screen with Rue's eyes is such a great stylistic choice. Seeing the kind of pressures she was facing at work in such detail really makes the ending hit harder. The world-building was also great; you have such an interesting setting here!
Astounding! I was drawn in from the very first line, but what really hooked me was the "Memory Depth" structure. The first moment that showed up I immediately thought "oh god what's at the bottom???". I loved how it would go up and down, giving us new pieces of the story but never quite everything; just enough to break my heart. The visual style was also incredible; I loved this sort of mixed-media approach!
A really interesting little VN! I loved the art, and the world-building is so cool... Mira trying her best to understand Ada through old websites and fragments, her insatiable curiosity about her, all culminating in that ending just works so well... I'm not going to be able to get that out of my head, honestly. And choosing to simultaneously highlight both perspectives on the game's climax was such an inspired choice!
This was really nice! Short but very sweet. Lucky's a really relatable character, and I felt that way even before her encounter with IX... I like that the story doesn't give us any easy answers, that Lucky's not sure what to make of what happened. It makes it feel real... the ending was really lovely, by the way! <3
This was really wonderful and... actually very sweet! I started off disliking Marimaite, but seeing the way her feelings towards Sitri changed through the story, I grew to like her more and more... there's this great atmosphere of dread throughout, and the way the tension between Marimaite and Sitri resolves by the end really surprised me in a good way...
Also just, Sitri is amazing and how could you NOT fall in love with her <3
The art in this is really lovely! The backgrounds and sprites are beautiful. And I love the world-building here too, it was really interesting! I loved having all those opportunities to "see the truth"... it made me a bit uncomfortable to use it, like I was sticking my nose where it didn't belong. But how else could I be sure Yoeli and Nesune were being truthful? It really helped add to the story's tension!
Speaking of Nesune... I love her, she's so cool! <3
Wow! The presentation on this one is really incredible! I loved the cool little animated portraits, and the little blips when characters talk was neat! The game is VERY funny as well; the date scene had me dying of laughter with each missed swing! But there's a darkness to it all as well, a loneliness and anxiety that's very familiar. The final scene is gonna stick with me... all in all, that was great!
This was wonderful! Selica was such a fun character to focus on, I love her attitude and stubbornness... all the characters really, are very well written. Eleanor is very interesting; I'd love to see more of her relationship with both Selica and Ludmilla. Honestly, I'd love to see more of these characters and this world in general! It was just really fun and exciting!
Also I wanna compliment you on the great sprites, and how well written the action scene was; very cool stuff! This is a wonderful debut for you and I'm excited to see more! ^^
This was really fun! It's a neat spin on this sort of abduction story, where the idol has kidnapped her fan instead of vice versa... it was really cool seeing how different things ended up by choosing a different option at the start. Also, I love the UI! It's really stylish, and it's cool how the narration, Juno, and Venus all have different fonts!
This was seriously just really beautiful... there's a lovely mix of fairy tale romance and horror that really captured my imagination! The body horror in this is really gnarly, with some wonderfully stomach-turning descriptions... but the romance between Abby and Mae is sublime! Love really does transform you, in such wonderful, wonderful ways... <3
This is a very exciting debut for you, and I'm really looking forward to what you write next!
This was actually really wonderful to read... like, despite everything Ember's been through it feels really hopeful. The scene where her and Millicent are just sleeping and cuddling in bed was so cute... it sounds strange to say because of everything that happened through the story, but this made me really happy to read. <3
I also wanna add that your art is amazing, and that the music was really REALLY good!
Love the visuals throughout the game; even with the minimalist portraits, you were able to convey so much. The punishment scenes were so well written... my favorite spanking scene I've come across in the jam so far >>; the ending really fucked me up. It's a real gut-punch. Anyway, fuck chasers. Great work!
I just finished reading through this and... wow. It was a lot. Your writing is beautiful. I loved seeing the narration just tell me what all the different characters were doing at that given time... and I loved the focus on many different characters, seeing their lives intertwine in interesting ways. I also want to shout out the scene where Argo and Nessa do acid together. That was beautiful; not just the way you wrote it, but also the sort of visual overlay you put over the scene for the fractals and stuff. There's so much going on in this one, I don't know what else to say other than amazing work. I feel hollowed out by it all (positive).















