There is NO way you are a newbie. This is one of my favorite games until now. This could really become a full game and I would be the first one to purchase it. Lets go for the reviews.
Gameplay: It is a 5/5, you created a drama from the beginning, implanted the curiosity into the players to understand why blip was acting weird and asking those questions, made us think twice to what are we registering.
Art/Visuals: Awesome choice for it, everything was fiting on its own spot, everything was connecting to each other, awesome choice on that, even the final character was completely weird and was scarying me so much.
Sound/SoundEffects: This was a complicated one, the sound were too loud, everytime I had to erase something that I was typing I was getting deaf. It is really loud and there is no option to lower the volume.
Overall: Your game with a bit of more story, puzzles and plot could become a real game, a real game on steam, epic or whatever platform, this right here is something with a HUGE potential, you litteraly created something bigger than expected, congratulations for your work. You were awesome!