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This is a cool idea and i love reading the notes I loved the sounds and art. I have a few things to be fixed make the platforming better your missing coyote time , jump buffering , air control ,acceleration and deceleration, different gravities for rising and falling and variable jump height. I didn't know how many notes i had to collect so i felt a tad lost and I don't know what the weird guy standing is meant to do. Lastly make the spikes more visible as I never realized there were spikes until when second playthrough. but other than that great first game and keep at you have a good start

yeah these are all nice observations and good notes, thanks for the advices, im a beginner so i will take these points into account in future projects, as of the weird guy it was meant to be that you talk to him but we didn't have much time, you can't pass through him till you collect all notes then he goes away and you can pass through