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I like the theme! but I feel like the theme could've been executed better.
the info dump in the beginning wasn't good, I'd suggest finding ways to  introduce mechanics while the player is playing or just introduce them at a slower pace. There were several typos and grammar errors during the tutorial which made it confusing for me. And the transitions are too slow, it gets repetitive after awhile.

Overall it can be better! I like how you have attention to detail with having different colors for different drinks! ^^

Thank you so much for the feedback! Sorry for the grammar error—it’s likely due to my English still being weak.

i'll improve myself!