This was really great, and had a lot of soul. I loved the mechanics (and that there was one per level??!), i loved the little bit of background story you had going on, i loved like 99% of the package.
the only friction i found was that on level 2 there is no explanation that i have to use the mouse to click and drag, and that the glitch areas are sometimes hard to distinguish from platforms you can stand on.
its crazy to think you're a first-time dev, this beats a lot of entries i've seen from experienced developers.