Ooooh, it was such a well-crafted experience! First of all, I did appreciate the poem a lot! The trigger warnings were essential to guide my reading, because I feel like the poem has this short of ambiguity that could be lead to a minsinterpretation - somehow, I was too manipulated by the unreliable narrator of this story, which was quite a strong move writing-wise! I also LOVE the art direction! The edits made to the piece (regarding the clouds and the character) were meaningful and very natural and well-done, and the setting chosen for this poem/story, a man, alone on the beach, was the perfect one. Congrats on making this, I really loved it!!
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Thank you for the kind words! I was unsure of how to word the content warning because you could interpret the relationship both positively or negatively. In the end, the decision remains with the reader. I'm glad it helped you!
The art direction for this was almost too true to the jam: I'm in the middle of a move, and I had no means to draw anything, so I had to rely on public domain to save me! The story just emerged from the artwork. It was a lot of fun though!