It's a natural outgrowth of juggling a regular 9-5 job rather than being a full time musician that I rarely get to build a non-unison instrument set, perhaps a cloning of the non-piano instrument past the interlude would have served it very much better.
I also probably have too much lyrical material in there by approximately one-third :)
(Which strained the process further)
I could feel that it was more flawed than the recent 'Interrobang / Real Penetration Has Never Been Tried' which I believe had far more successful flow.
Glad you gave it the effort of a full analysis.
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