Thank you so much for playing the demo and for your kind words! I'm very glad that you enjoyed the demo. There will be an updated demo with an expanded prologue and new GUI that has new features & content coming early next month. Additional CGs will be added too.
I've also fixed up some plot things that I wasn't content with (especially the scene where Xani tells Clive where she moves right away, which I've changed to a dialogue choice).
Hopefully this will also fix up some of the things that you had issues with, but if you have anything specific you'd like to give input on, please feel free to mention it!