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Thank you for your feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the new update.

As for the grammar errors. I always encourage players to share them on my discord server. There is a channel dedicated to that. But that's optional, of course.

But that's weird coz I had both AI and a proofreader do the job. And my beta testers also do some proofreading during their play. I was sure this release was the best in terms of dialogues and their quality. Might take a better look. Please share at least one example if you can. 

Thank you. 

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Ok first example is only a couple of lines in:

Rashmi says while speaking to her AI assistant Eve

Rashmi 'How long till the analysis complete?'

This is an example of what I mean. The spelling is 100% correct but the sentence is incomplete. 

It should be:

Rashmi 'How long till the analysis is complete?'

A couple of lines later you've got another one just like that one, combined with a spelling error:

Rashmi 'God damn, this coffe is cold and taste like piss.'

Should be:

Rashmi 'God damn, this coffee is cold and tastes like piss.'

There's a lot more but unfortunately I don't want to join your Discord channel. I reserve my Discord for friends and family, nothing personal. Just don't want to miss their messages among the dozens of messages that would crowd my feed if I joined heaps of AVN based channels.

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Thank you.

You're welcome.