Ok first example is only a couple of lines in:
Rashmi says while speaking to her AI assistant Eve
Rashmi 'How long till the analysis complete?'
This is an example of what I mean. The spelling is 100% correct but the sentence is incomplete.
It should be:
Rashmi 'How long till the analysis is complete?'
A couple of lines later you've got another one just like that one, combined with a spelling error:
Rashmi 'God damn, this coffe is cold and taste like piss.'
Should be:
Rashmi 'God damn, this coffee is cold and tastes like piss.'
There's a lot more but unfortunately I don't want to join your Discord channel. I reserve my Discord for friends and family, nothing personal. Just don't want to miss their messages among the dozens of messages that would crowd my feed if I joined heaps of AVN based channels.