Hi! So I just finished reading the latest version, 0.4, and its pretty good.
The story is progressing nicely, especially the parts concerning Rashmi, but also the more romantic elements.
Although I am still hoping that a throuple with Chloe, Cathy and the MC is a possibility...
I will happily settle for Cathy all by herself if I must.
The pictures are of the highest quality so I have absolutely no complaints there.
One thing I noticed as I was reading though was that there a quite a few grammar errors throughout the new content. No spelling errors, just missing words and/or the wrong word used.
In fact there were far too many for me to list them all here. It would take too much room and take a lot of time to type it all up.
Its also the sort of thing a professional proofreader should do, rather than an amateur such as myself.
I still loathe Octavia by the way :P
Anyways, keep up the good work.