just gotta say like every single time you've used the word "precisely" it's been wrong and should be "exactly" they do have more or less the same meaning as words, but the phrase is "not exactly" and it's very awkward when changed to "not precisely" and I need to re-read it to understand, another awkward word swap is, "avoid" used in various ways of what I eventually realise as meaning "couldn't help but" which takes 2 or 3 re-reads every time, you also use "could notice" in place of "realise" but that one doesn't read as poorly as the other 2