It's real in parts, it's rough in some edges. I'm glad I read it overall. I think that the story could benefit a lot from a slower escalation of stakes, to really savor the push-pull of a toxic relationship, but given the time constraints of a game jam's it's good.
I think there's a raw emotional core to this story that rings true, and with enough polish can become something that packs a real good punch to the gut. I see and appreciate the intent, congratulations on putting it out.