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Thank you for the kind comment! I am having a good morning, and therefore the following option will be added to C1 (and about 250 unique words since this choice adds some flavor text to a few places) whenever I update the next time :D Though I did not look at what I wrote later when being given stuff. 

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Aww, that's so amazing! After reading what was available I immediately went to Ko-fi to read chapter 3. It continues to be great. The small hints of hope that the MC can have, but combined with significant setbacks (always going to happen when recovering from trauma) are very well portrayed. And the overarching mystery of what the MCs kidnappers were trying to uncover and what they did to the MCs body to create that reaction to mana continue to intrigue.

I know the project is in its infancy and I try not to get my hopes up about works in progress, given how many fall by the wayside, but know that you have an amazing concept and your writing style is very engaging. I can't wait to see the opportunity available for interaction with the twins. My MC is very distrustful of the adults around him, but I can see him being able to open up more to the twins, Atru especially.

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Happy to hear C3 was not horrible, even in the current state :D The writing sessions there was so disjointed so I was worried! Though I already noticed some bugs, but if you did not trust the adults, it will not have been so noticeable :D  Well the one I found at least, I am sure there is more. That variable had a typo in a few spots that always lead to MC being very suspicious.