The character art is really nice, and if one of the goals of this game was to let people know about your art, then it's succeeded, at least for me. Looks like you're a big Roxie and Loona fan! I'll be really curious to see if you experiment with a bunch of different species and body types in this, as a VN is a great field to do that. Background art is pretty fantastic too, though I personally like to see the locations a bit more intertwined with what happens in the scene (Eg. A cabin in the distance eventually leading to a scene there. Or similarity, an overview of a town with the locations all factoring into the plot.)
The writing is... Well, you did say the game was "mystery-filled". I'll be honest, it felt kinda Game Jam-y(as in, like it was rushed.)
I do like the focus on Crimson Paw, but that's really all the Itch.io version focused on. The jump into sex is extremely fast, which again, I get this is an H-game, but really? We only found her name and she's already offering herself to the player?
The werewolf stuff, while clearly forecasted with the description, still felt like a bait and switch the way it plays out. I thought the first scene would be solely in the PC's human form, with like, maybe a dialogue option to transform, but nope, a wolf cock flashed right at me. You might want to add a few screenshots of the PC with wolf hands, or the wolf cock to the preview shots.
I thought the post-werewolf choice was a missed opportunity to show the player losing control, it would have been interesting if picking the option resulted in the opposite choice being picked.
I very much agree with what FemboyLover78 said, and am also *much* more into Human on Anthro than anything else, and I hope in the future you'll add an option to skip the opening sex scene, or have a human version of it in the future.
To add on questions, and this is very long term one, but judging by the fact that "human only" characters will be a thing, I assume that would also lead to the player "curing" himself, or at least learning to control it.
I hope I wasn't too critical in this review. This is honestly still a great showing. And I will be following it's progress with great interest!