This visual novel was so, so good. I really love how you write characters, how in depth and matter of fact you go into discussing their mental illnesses, and how they're never demonized even when they mess up or act in ways that upset/harm others. The humanity that your characters have and are treated with is so comforting to read. Seeing how much Emma loves Aiyana for who she is, mental illness and disorders and all, just made my heart swell... Even when things started to get toxic, everything Emma did still felt like it was coming from a place of genuine love, of just being someone without a lot of experience desperate to protect the one person they love the most...
Your art is gorgeous, and the character designs were so pretty. I loved seeing all the different hair styles and outfits. I also loved all of the little anime and yuri references, and Aiyana being a translator for yuri works, it was just a really great little bit of the story that added to the atmosphere of it in a way that's hard to explain.
I really loved this, though. I had it open in a tab and had been planning to read it, but I missed how long it was and started playing thinking it would be a short read- but I was so gripped that I just read through the whole thing in one go. I'm glad you were able to create this, and I look forward to more works from you!!