very good read!! i love how strong the characters' voices are, and the art is really cute. i felt like with the panels popping up it was like reading a comic at times, which worked well with aiyana's hobbies hehehe~ also, oh my gooosh adelaide. she stole the show for me, i love her, even if she is a little problematic with what she tells emma it's an iconic way ok #adelaidedidnothingwrong. im being silly ofc, but i really did enjoy this! also, i know at the end there's a note about the word count and how the game asks for more time but personally i really enjoy things at this pace, i feel more immersed in the story and world! good job :)
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thank you! i had every character's background/family/culture in mind which helped me figure out how they talk. it was something i wanted to emphasize!!! and yes, the panels, i plan to talk about this when i make my author's afterword but this visual novel is heavily inspired by my manwha reading habits jaja!!! i ALSO really enjoyed writing adelaide and love seeing how people react to her <3 and thank you!! hmm.. making shorter works for these kinds of jams is easier on readers so it was a bit anxiety inducing to make something like this! but i agree, i like the pacing and the length is not something i'd change despite the anxieties i had upon release- i'm thankful to everyone who has given me their time immersing themselves in my work. tysm for your in depth feedback!!