Yeah, I really enjoyed it and got all three endings! Bones doesn't look like he's in a weird position, so long as the person doesn't hide the textbox. By the time DJ and Charity form an alliance, that's when I really got into it and got a sense of things. You did a really fantastic job on the art, which drew me into the VN to begin with. The music was fitting as well.
I've been reading through other visual novels for the toxic yuri game jam, as I also submitted a VN to this jam, too. It's called Alone if you're interested in checking it out, and even in that one, I start off with a clear and short exposition that states the theme or overall message of the story, and then I get straight into the rising action afterwards.
My visual novels tend to be pretty short and revolve around the short story structure. Yet, I could tell all the work you did when plotting and planning out this story of yours, as I find it very impressive for you to do all of that for such a multi-faceted story such as this one, especially for it being a mystery, which can be a harder genre to write compared to other ones.
The story beats were definitely there, and nothing felt dragged out or rushed. So, you're definitely a better story-teller than I am.
The dialogue also felt natural. At times, the lines were funny. Other times, they were subtle hints to something more.
I loved it, and the way you weaved your story to add in the toxic yuri dynamic as well was well done, too.
So, least to say, I'm interested in your other upcoming works to come!