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Once I started playing this, I couldn't stop until I reached one of the pseudo-endings. I still need to get a the other three, but I. AM. IN LOVE. The art is fantastic to look at, the dialogue is so eloquently written, so many places literally had me laughing out loud. I really love how serious Jay is! But oh my... I think I am falling in love with Wren, especially after that dream flashback, so I am assuming I got on his route. It tugged my heartstrings. I'm a sucker for childhood friend routes lol. Here I thought it'd be different 'cause yo, Jay is a fantastic character, but then BAM! Wren's dream lol. Let's see what happens when I get the other 3 ends, but I thoroughly enjoyed Part 1 so far and looking forward to the second!

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Thank you for appreciating Wren! I'm a little worried he'll be overshadowed by Jay in this part because of the nature of his interactions with Robin. He's got his good points, too!

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Honestly you did well in crafting 2 really excellent guys!! Which I think is great, since it'll encourage players to really want all those endings, and not just for completion, but because it's gonna be amazing~ Jay is fun because of his unrest and banter with Robin, buuut, Wren has this special charm and the little "game" between him and Robin keeps me in suspense, like what will happen if Robin falters? Wren is quite smart, and has a high chance of winning against Robin methinks. It's all so well crafted for a simple story that takes place on a train!

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I'm pretty fond of the bad ends (not to mention they give a little extra background on the plot and characters), so I hope you're right and people do seek them out!

As for Wren, well... a glimpse of how he would feel if Robin lost can be seen in his bad end.

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Definitely gonna achieve all those ends later today! Your project was the one I looked most forward to this NaNo ^^

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I appreciate it! I'll be playing some of the other entries over the next few days, so I'll let you know what I think of yours as well!