Honestly this was a hilarious entry. I loved the absurdness of it all. From the breakneck pace of the story to the enormous assets that every character had (I mean just look at how big the chief's tail is! XD).
I can't really give anything meaningful in terms of things like grammar issues, the occasional spelling mistake, and the floating sprites. Since a couple of others have already commented about it.
A funny little story to put a smile on my face and some eye-candy to boot. Nice job!