Not bad storytelling and the mechanics by now feels good.
Are you considering to add art to the game or more customization to the default Twine?
Thank you for playing!
Art may be something to consider in the distant future, but for now most of my effort is focused on my other game and trying to finish it before any massive updates or changes. It also hinges entirely on actually finding an artist to pay.
I'll definitely see what I can do regarding the Twine systems and do my best to make it flow as seamlessly as possible.