I really love the artwork for this a looot!! My only comment is that I think the pacing of the story could be quite a bit slower, it seems like everything happens so fast and so it's hard to get attached to the main character's kid and wife before it matters, but it is a demo so I understand why the pacing might be faster because of this! I really hope the story is expanded upon in the future and I find it really cool that you got voice acting for it as well :] !!