The crashing sounds at the 1 minute mark and again at around 1:20 were very foreboding, which made for great storytelling! The middle part reminds me a bit of being chucked into a fight scene and the ending is the 'Game Over' outcome. Well done!
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Thank you! It does have a very three-act feel about it doesn't it... With the pacing I went for, I more or less was trying to keep people in their seats during intermission by bringing in ballpark vendors, if you pardon the linguistic gymnastics. =P. That 2 minute time limit can definitely be pretty brutal XD.