Hey,
Loved the atmosphere, and especially with the hand drawn controls & menu. The story telling was also really cool. The only thing that put me off was the final screen that you see. It felt a bit goofy and I couldn't help but laugh, which felt at odds with the rest of the atmosphere you've built up.
Just a small thing, I would recommend building it for the WebGL platform so you can play it in browser. The effort of downloading & trusting an executable can be a barrier to entry for people wanting to rate a game.
I agree with monnierant with the flashlight. Also having the flashlight & other lights have some random flickering I think would help to add to the already great atmosphere.