This is my favourite chapter by far! I can't wait for the next one...
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I have to say I wish MC's love confession to Ted had more dialogue. Like, MC bares their soul to the man they've loved for years (Yes, I know he's married! Lol) and he just kind of chides MC and avoids even touching their shoulder... (Maybe I'm just butthurt, but damn that's so cold). I understand he's just experienced some severe trauma that's altered his perception of reality forever lol (and I know you're probably cookin' something good for the next chapter-- and I know Ted's not a real love interest, yes!).
Don't get me wrong I LOVE Flea and I know you can only add so much angst in one chapter. I love how organic the love between Flea and MC is. I guess I'm just messy and love maximum drama because I'm trash lol.
That being said I love your writing and I'm really sad there's only 2(?) chapters left 😭 how will I go on without my boys?