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Thank you, I also really loved that you kept the opt for the tattoo's colour selection, it's something really rare...! [Wrath would probably blush at the compliment and then regain composure immediately lol]

Btw that actually reminds me, if you ever need another beta reader I am more than available!

Lots of love Effie <3 

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Really?! I'm actually surprised to hear that tattoo colours might be an uncommon customization option, especially since a lot of IFs have much more customization than Garden of Bones! Extra glad I included it in the demo now. Your Wrath being the type to blush and then hide it is quite funny lol: self-assured, closely guarded individuals are good fun to be around, both IRL and in fiction. We can't all wear our heart on our sleeves, right? 

And WOW, that offer is such a kind one. (ㅅ´ ˘ `) I've actually been meaning to inquire after additional beta readers, so if you're still willing to have all illusions of a sensible reading experience shattered (lol) by the time Chapter 2 is finished, let me know! I can't imagine it will be playable for at least another few weeks tbh... a lot of it is drafted and the rest of it outlined, but almost none of it coded yet and one particular scene has so many variants that I actually needed a flowchart to work it out, which is rare for me, lol.

I would have said that the best way to reach me is probably on my tumblr through direct messages (if you have a tumblr) but at the moment my main blog is shadowbanned and I don't think you can send DMs through the side-blog feature, so perhaps I'll just leave a comment here and we'll work something else out at the time. Hmmm. 

Maybe discord, if you have one of those? 

Either way, all the best, Aura! 

I do not have Tumblr... I do have discord tho! I'd really love to help so... how do I reach you? Like through discord do you have a server?


Anyways thank you Effie for the compliments lol! I just replayed through a new garden lol and your writing really never fails to amaze!
Love, Aura <3

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That sounds great! There's no need to worry about reaching out: I'll reply to this comment when Chapter 2 is finished enough for beta-reading to see if you're still interested by then, if that's alright with you? I do have a discord account, and tbh I should probably start a server - I don't have many betas at the moment but it might be useful someday.

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Perfect! See you then <3

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Hello! I decided to go ahead and make a new discord server so that it's already set up when Chapter 2 is complete - if you decide to join, you'll be the only person there for now, because my current beta readers leave feedback in DMs and elsewhere; however, I did see that discord has a server application feature that might be helpful for future betas!

Anyway, if you reply to this comment the next time you're browsing itch, I can send you a one-time invite link while you're online. ⸜(˶ᵔ ᵕ ᵔ˶)⸝ I think that would be the best way to go about this. Hopefully I'll see the notification...

I'll check in more often for a few days, but again, no pressure!

~ Effie

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I'm here!!! Glad to see you got the discord server set up, I'm more than glad to be a beta reader. I am actually an author with one book and my first IF in progress! So I shall be helpful with literally everything except the coding lol.

Amazing, that's wonderful to hear! And again, if it's temporary or you end up being unable to beta Chapter 2 for some reason, absolutely no worries. Here's a link! https://discord.gg/tzbD48R2