Ooohhh I love your Wrath's appearance! The green eyes and black hair is such a vibe with the red moon tattoo. It was very cool for me to read through all of that and I'm really glad you vibe with the writing style, too!
I frequently pick the "adorable" choice while playtesting because it's one of my favourites, and after hearing that you were taken aback by vanity appearing in your profile (lol) I'll probably mark those choices as important before the update goes live so that players really consider their options. That's only fair, since it's part of character creation. Adding it to my to-do list. The self-assured trait is a very unique one as well, by the way; I can guess a few of your choices from Wrath's description!
Spotted at least one typo and one broken variable, but thankfully resolved those in the "new" demo (no new chapter yet, just revisions, I keep feeling the need to repeat myself online so I don't accidentally disappoint anyone haha) which should be up later today or tomorrow. I'll admit I've already started working on Chapter 2 again...
Will probably have to do some troubleshooting for a while, depending on what bugs players message me about, but after that it's back to the new content full-time. And no worries at all about reading these comments. It's been a nice break from edits and it's honestly great to see how different your choices were from my beta readers. Makes me very happy I put so much early effort toward character customization!
Good luck to Wrath!
~ Effie