I’ll start by saying the dialogue and interactions in this VN is strong. Even in some sad scenes, this VN sprinkles in some comedic lines to lighten the mood a bit.
Despite some readers who mention context is required as this is a spin-off from an original work, you can read this as a bittersweet standalone story about breaking up, and learning to move on while finding the strength to reconnect/cope. And in that regard, the story has strong implementation of the theme.
Patrice as a character has his flaws but his way of coping with the breakup is very relateable and that makes his actions very grounded. I think, if given enough time to learn about the characters, readers will grow to love them even more (specifically Liam). The arts in this VN are done with full of love, care and effort (and also horniness ;3) and I appreciate the subtle details added in every CG/scene.
Overall, I enjoyed this VN a lot and I only hope the best for the team. Great work and thanks for sharing this with us.