Hello! Thank you for reading and giving a review!
I'm sorry, I might be a bit slow trying to understand what you said, but what do you mean that the character tags were used for narration related to the character?
Yeah, logically the highways would definitely be jammed with almost little to no room to drive through. That was an oversight on my part honestly, I wrote it and then didn't give it a second thought.
That's fair honestly, I should have thought about putting a conflict point in the story in that section, but again, I didn't think about it.
I agree completely that this is a very bare-bones story, although I am happy to see some people think it has potential! After the judging period is over I will try to add some more to the story to make it a bit better. Thank you for your suggestions and review, and I hope you have a good day/night!