Story - Very cool concept piece! Loved the small acts that made all the difference. I'm not sure what is happening in this world, but the peacefulness makes me okay with that.
Mechanics - I found myself clicking all over the place, hoping that I'd find the clickable thing. Because of this, I accidentally skipped almost all of the dialogue between the characters, because I'd click so fast that the speech bubble wouldn't have time to load. I think the strongest bit was the final scene in the night sky. The interactable elements gave a very gentle wiggle that made it very clear what I was supposed to click on next, which allowed me to be a little more precise and take my time with the scene.
Theme - Little moments of generosity and kindness. Really touching stuff.
Audio/Visual - Amazing audio, amazing visuals. That night sky after the clouds passed was *chef's kiss*
Overall - Cool little bite-sized experience! Great job!