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I like the game, but May is problematic. Her hair style, petite form, and enlarged eyes combine to give her an appearance of being underaged, and her naive, innocent demeanor doesn’t help with her maturity.

Other than her, it’s good. The story is at the point now where it’s really interesting to see the direction it’s going, the animation quality is great. The girls have likeable and distinct personalities.

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May's appearance in the initial release wasn't presented in the best way. I get what you mean (especially if you're referring to her look in v0.1 and some renders from v0.2). I'll rework that when I have more free time. Right now, my focus is on progressing the story. And May - both in terms of appearance and depth - will continue to grow and develop as the plot unfolds. By the end of v0.3, her appearance already started to shift noticeably, you might have picked up on that.

Thanks for the feedback! I've taken it all into account.

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I’m really glad to hear that! It’s the one thing that makes this game hard to recommend to others, when otherwise, I really enjoy it. You’re a complete mad lad with all the animations you have in the game (idle animations!? crazy!), but they make this game stand out as an impressive feat that I haven’t seen in any other AVNs.

I did pick up on her model change, she looks better in the bar at the end. Young, but passable for petite 18. But it still stands out in a bad way in the earlier build so I hope it can be changed sooner before you get too far into the story and have to re-render more. I’ve played the current public build, which is 0.3.

Looking forward to more though!

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No worries! How far the story goes doesn't really matter for that. If I get some time between the 0.4 and 0.5 updates, I'll definitely work on improving those earlier scenes.

Thanks a lot!

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That cute, innocent babyface kinda girl is right up my alley.   Looks like I better download this version before it's "fixed" for other people...  >_>;

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You might've misunderstood me a bit. Her cute face will stay cute, just a little more refined, as you may have noticed near the end of v0.3.

Her personality and model aren’t changing, but the presentation - which might have caused some concern - is what I'll be tweaking. I'm confident I can strike the right balance.

Either way, you'll see the difference once I get around to it.

For now, here's an updated render from one of the older scenes (already in the current version - image 1), and another render from outside the game (image 2) to give you a better idea of what I mean: