This one was a bit of a doozy for me. The thumbnail is... I think unintentionally hilarious. The giant flaming meteor, the weird placement of the text, the giant black empty space, the wolf sequestered down to the side.
I feel like there definitely could've been some political commentary at play with an insane US president causing the apocalypse but... he's right? Like it turns out he actually was a prophet from god? Huh???? Bold creative decision. Really it just felt very stilted to me. The two main characters are really the only people rushing anywhere in the apocalypse? They also spent a lot of time talking about how much they love each other without really giving any examples or showing us. It's a really cheesy ending to a really cheesy story, and that's not inherently bad, but I think a little bit better thought into the characters relationship and their struggles. Everything just kinda happens and then it's over.
Still, I'm glad you got your VN out and turned in before the deadline, you should be proud of yourself!