I like the intro cliff hanger haha, I need to know the ending. Dialog and writing was well done!
Gameplay wise I only vaguely knew which item was which, some sort of mouse over text or description would have helped me a little. I also didn't seem to be able to progress past my first plate. I loaded it up, and tried every button I had available to submit the order/proceed but it didn't seem to work.
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Yes, there were more people who had trouble distinguishing the items (we forgot to include the item descriptions on our list, we only realized it 2 days after the deadline lol).
I'm glad you liked the script and the dialogues, the scriptwriter on our team worked hard and gave us two pages of each character, we even had to cut content so we could post it...