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At the end of the prologue we see that it is Luca who does the deed but it is Albert who commits the most despicable act. Perhaps this was a mistake?

Anyways I very thoroughly enjoyed the update and keep up the stellar writing!!!❤️

No mistake, actually. What I meant with that is that the despicable act Albert/Lavina made was looking away while Leire/Luca… well, did what they did. Though now that I look at it again, perhaps it’s not clear enough and should change how it is phrased. Sorry for the confusion 😅

Oooooh so that's how it is, well that makes more sense now 😂

I found some other bugs whilst reading through so I would like to share them whilst we are at it

1. I'm not sure if this happens with other eye colours but when MC has grey eyes the underlined word shows up

2. When having  Gara we see the sudden mention of Rayco as shown underlined

3. I'm not sure if this happens with Mako too but it happens with Iasa as shown underlined

4. Nisa's pronouns seem to change at the beginning of the paragraph but then go back to normal


I saw a few more and I will try to send them to you when I can. There are also a few small spelling mistakes but I thought I would send in the bigger errors. Thanks!

Thank you for repoting those, I appreciate it! It should be all fixed now :D

Lol sorry to bother you again 😭  I just found the ones that I forgot to report

1. Spanish spotted (lmao it was a nice surprise since I speak it as well 😂)

2. When choosing the "Just a weak mortal" option on the page before this appears. It also happens when choosing to avoid the question; the same error appears

Anyways those are all the major ones I spotted

Can't wait for Chapter 7!!!!

It's no bother at all. It's actually a huge help! Thanks for pointing those out as well :D 

And lol! That's what happens when I switch between languages while writing xD