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Lmfao just know that I’m very angry at them right now and poor Locto 😭

After re-reading the whole act 2 I just realised that Alcorac and Abora LIED to us at the beginning when they were talking about Locto saying that he destroyed his own kind when that wasn't the case. I hope we address this in the future because I am loosing my little faith in them by the minute
As always AMAZING chapters and can't wait for more 😁❤️

Oooooh that's really interesting. Lmao I am glad that there is no feature of RO rejecting MC I feel like that in a way defeats the purpose of IFs being fictional works in the first place 😭😭 but each to their own!

Also the way there is no mention of Belicar/Nisa anywhere is quite funny 😂

Hey! I have a few questions if you don't mind

1. Is there a chance to fail the romances e.g. RO rejecting MC (Although an interesting/realistic mechanic I don't enjoy it on IFs but of course this is your choice!!!)

2. On a scale 1-10 how angst filled are the RO routes?

3. On a scale 1-10 how fluff filled are the routes after establishing a relationship?

Thanks and take care ❤️❤️❤️

Lol sorry to bother you again 😭  I just found the ones that I forgot to report

1. Spanish spotted (lmao it was a nice surprise since I speak it as well 😂)

2. When choosing the "Just a weak mortal" option on the page before this appears. It also happens when choosing to avoid the question; the same error appears

Anyways those are all the major ones I spotted

Can't wait for Chapter 7!!!!

Oooooh so that's how it is, well that makes more sense now 😂

I found some other bugs whilst reading through so I would like to share them whilst we are at it

1. I'm not sure if this happens with other eye colours but when MC has grey eyes the underlined word shows up

2. When having  Gara we see the sudden mention of Rayco as shown underlined

3. I'm not sure if this happens with Mako too but it happens with Iasa as shown underlined

4. Nisa's pronouns seem to change at the beginning of the paragraph but then go back to normal

I saw a few more and I will try to send them to you when I can. There are also a few small spelling mistakes but I thought I would send in the bigger errors. Thanks!

At the end of the prologue we see that it is Luca who does the deed but it is Albert who commits the most despicable act. Perhaps this was a mistake?

Anyways I very thoroughly enjoyed the update and keep up the stellar writing!!!❤️