Spoiler Alert!
A rather short entry, felt much more like a scene in a bigger story than a full story itself. I’d love for there to be a bit of more music in the game, especially in the casual scene in the first half. The switching was perhaps a bit jarring, even with the subtle foreshadowing (that one line about the other 3). Otherwise, there wasn’t really another cue as to what was really happening until it actually happens, which made it feel a bit contrived.
Gobaith as a character felt kind of bland, in the sense that everything about him felt so vague, it was never clear what he is (though my assumption is just ‘God’) but I think that fact could really use some clarification (maybe at the final scene w/ Death).
Another thing is how the MC ‘baited’ Famine, especially when in one of the earlier lines (if i remember correctly) it was said that a rich businessmen would prefer the fancier shops down the street. But that ‘bait’ was never expanded on, leaving everything to imagination.
Also a little nitpicky thing, it’s usually not a good idea to slam someone with a wall of text on the first line, but maybe it’s just a me thing.
The theme is clear, with the 4 horsemen wolves and the MC-the antithesis of them. With the genre shift though, the theme only become relevant in the later half (but the entry is really short, so maybe that’s for the better)
P.S I wish I could get off without paying like Tony, speaking as the coffee addict here.
Rating: 3234