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I’m a bit stumped because on one hand, I really enjoyed the creativity that you showcased, on the other, I personally don’t see how this connects to the theme. That said!

The visual and audio representation is on point, and the story was interesting. Not sure where to put it or how to “process” it, but it was interesting. I’m not a huge visual novel fan, but this was a good one!

Really dig the distorted visuals you went through with. Well done!

This is really cool feedback, thank you! The connection to the theme is that the bookstore is out of place/position and she's trying to uncover why. Just so I understand, what do you mean by being unsure how to process the story?

Thank you again, I'm really happy you enjoyed it!!