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Short entry but very interesting premise, however there are a few points that drag it down. One of which I found particularly jarring was the turning demon scene being referred to in third-person (which is fine, but maybe there could’ve been a less disorienting way). Oh, and the point of not being on guard after just one day of escaping just to be captured. Plus the fact that MC as a normal person randomly commits an act so incredibly uncharacteristic right after another feral was nearby simply gets dismissed as traitor (I get that the king being the king, but his best friend too? Come on.)

For presentation, there’s a lack of sfx and music, sprite lacks variation/expression, grammatical errors, some lines is supposed to be dialogue instead of narrative, and you should add some type of transition to the sprites (totally not saying this cuz i got jumpscared by the bnnuy sprite at the start)

For theme, the ‘Dark’ is clearly there, though Arkadiusz being ‘Light’ doesn’t really fit (white fur don’t count :vv) but that’s my only guesss.

P.S MC better than me cuz I’d be on my knees stuffing all that “food” in after drying him.

Rating: 2334

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Thank you for playing my VN! ... and yes I would be on my knees too.

The writing could definitely be better, but this was the general premise and plot points I definitely wanted to follow with their story. I tried my best to segue into the MC's execution but I guess the deadline just caught up to me. 

At first I wanted the throne room scene to be different, instead having the peasant be dragged away and the MC feeling remorseful and empathetic for his situation. MC would try to break him out of the prison and would get caught by the guards, which would then cause the king to question MCs loyalty. The demons would have to come from antecedent action, perhaps setting them up through dream sequences where MC struggles with visions and urges to kill the king/overthrow the throne through organizing the people. The bunny guy is a stalwart defender of the king and extremely loyal (something I tried to portray through his bloodlust for the peasant) so he would obviously feel betrayed by his friend actively organizing a revolt against his precious king. But I digress.

Ultimately, this was an attempt to force out the story I envisioned to meet a deadline. Most of the decisions and writing were rushed to meet the demands of the plot; the art, music, and coding were rushed as well. Especially with the sprites, I wish I had the time to really get them up to 'gooning standards' for lack of a better term. It was a good swing but I unfortunately missed the target on this one. I feel like I owe it to the characters and world I created to try again after the jam. To try again and realize my VN to its fullest potential.

I thank you for taking the time to write your review out and for playing my visual novel, it means a lot!