Thank you for playing my VN! ... and yes I would be on my knees too.
The writing could definitely be better, but this was the general premise and plot points I definitely wanted to follow with their story. I tried my best to segue into the MC's execution but I guess the deadline just caught up to me.
At first I wanted the throne room scene to be different, instead having the peasant be dragged away and the MC feeling remorseful and empathetic for his situation. MC would try to break him out of the prison and would get caught by the guards, which would then cause the king to question MCs loyalty. The demons would have to come from antecedent action, perhaps setting them up through dream sequences where MC struggles with visions and urges to kill the king/overthrow the throne through organizing the people. The bunny guy is a stalwart defender of the king and extremely loyal (something I tried to portray through his bloodlust for the peasant) so he would obviously feel betrayed by his friend actively organizing a revolt against his precious king. But I digress.
Ultimately, this was an attempt to force out the story I envisioned to meet a deadline. Most of the decisions and writing were rushed to meet the demands of the plot; the art, music, and coding were rushed as well. Especially with the sprites, I wish I had the time to really get them up to 'gooning standards' for lack of a better term. It was a good swing but I unfortunately missed the target on this one. I feel like I owe it to the characters and world I created to try again after the jam. To try again and realize my VN to its fullest potential.
I thank you for taking the time to write your review out and for playing my visual novel, it means a lot!