hi! just played this for the first time. firstly, i would like to say that im intrigued by the premise and am looking forward to having more of this story!
some feedback:
- on the last page, there is a typo where you wrote "intersts" instead of "interests"
- while i like use of music to set the tone/ambiance, for me, i found that it changes tracks too often and veers into being distracting/grating rather than supplementing the vibe - specifically, between when you leave galen and when you wake up with kyliah and remus, i think the track changes 4 times? additionally, and this might just be a me thing, i found the tracks to be on the loud side.
- this might also be personal preference, but i found axis' introduction to be kind of jarring. he shows up out of nowhere with a dragon, and it feels like the MC does not have the choice to be as freaked out by this guy as i feel a sane person would. i kinda wish i had the option to run away from him immediately LOL
anyway, my MC currently has the sage of light personality, and im keeping my eyes on remus and severin romance-wise. looking forward to the next update!