i mean... the game is under the romance tag, and the structure of the game is pretty explicitly built around romance routes. i can't really tell what you want. if you don't want to play a romance game, then just don't??? but don't play a romance game and then complain that you're "forced" to romance the character you specifically chose to romance lol.
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no worries! i leave feedback because i like where this is going and want to see it grow and improve. i'm looking forward to future updates! also, please feel free to reach out to me if you'd like a beta reader -- i'm not really a writer myself but i read a lot and love to edit, i tend to edit things in my head even as i'm reading them LOL.
hi! just played this for the first time. firstly, i would like to say that im intrigued by the premise and am looking forward to having more of this story!
some feedback:
- on the last page, there is a typo where you wrote "intersts" instead of "interests"
- while i like use of music to set the tone/ambiance, for me, i found that it changes tracks too often and veers into being distracting/grating rather than supplementing the vibe - specifically, between when you leave galen and when you wake up with kyliah and remus, i think the track changes 4 times? additionally, and this might just be a me thing, i found the tracks to be on the loud side.
- this might also be personal preference, but i found axis' introduction to be kind of jarring. he shows up out of nowhere with a dragon, and it feels like the MC does not have the choice to be as freaked out by this guy as i feel a sane person would. i kinda wish i had the option to run away from him immediately LOL
anyway, my MC currently has the sage of light personality, and im keeping my eyes on remus and severin romance-wise. looking forward to the next update!