This is a really fun premise that was unfortunately brought down a little by poor writing choices. The story of a royal-guard-turned-demon in a medieval fantasy is a fun one, but there are certain quirks of its writing that gave me pause, such as grammar errors, some awkward similes, and the plot contrivances that caused everyone to see the people obviously possessed by demons as "traitors to the crown" and not suspect anything supernatural in the least. The sprites also could have used some work, such as adding more expressions. Still, I found myself engaged by the plot nonetheless, from the rebellion against the bastard king to the sweet yet horny interactions with My Wolf. Also, not to spoil the ending, but it was surprisingly tragic in a good way.
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I'm glad that you enjoyed the premise and ending! I do agree that there are some pitfalls in the plot that could use some reworking and I think that having a proofread or two it would help a lot (I was running on a first draft basically). The story did feel a bit awkward at parts and that's probably cause I didn't make a full outline beforehand. A lot of stuff just sorta happens because the plot demands it and I do think some of that was due to the time constraint. But to be fair this is my first time writing creatively since middle school so my skills have probably stayed around that level since then. I do appreciate your feedback as I am hoping to remake this VN and flesh it out a bit more.
Thanks for playing my first visual novel! :D