hiya, here are some stray notes i took while reading this one!
before i get into the meat of it, just wanted to say that this entry was one of two that my layout designer specifically wanted to call out for being excellent cases to look at while she was figuring out how to do ours. kudos from her! ok now it's my turn to read!
realllly nice writing on the intro page. sets me up perfectly to both get the vibe and want to know more.
sirens are a great horror, and the transformation timeline is scary as heck, nice work!
great legible layout for the map. appreciate the color coding for encounters/loot etc. color choices on the whole, actually, really nice across the board. i wouldn't mind a little more to break up the segments of text, but that's a minor quibble.
really enjoyed this one! plenty of great headfucks baked in, very pretty presentation, probably some of my fave original art of the entire jam. nice work!