Cool idea! Lots of emotions, but unclear on what is happening. I can tell there is a lot of passion in this project and I am excited to see what it could become! Would love sfx/ music with each location to help with immersion, but overall, great job! Here are some notes meant to be helpful so you can continue to grow and improve as a game developer:
1) The text moving as each character is added is sometimes hard to read. I wonder if there is a way to add each character that doesn't change the position of every character (Think stardew valley)
2) Going through the same rooms multiples times takes my light, even if I already prayed for peace or altered the memory, so that felt strange
3) Going down after I go left takes me to the beginning and plays the message as if I ran out of light.
4) I can get to negative light which looks strange on screen - maybe clamping it so it cannot go negative?
5) Quite a few spelling / grammar mistakes which just leads to me being taken out of immersion
Great job getting this game up!