hiya, here are some stray notes i took while reading this one!
this is some of the cleanest art/layout i have seen yet, great work. from the connecting letters in the title, placement of art pieces, and... my god. that map. spent far longer than i meant to just staring at it. beautiful details. an absolute treat
great characterization of keir delivered very efficiently.
i don't think i've seen any representations of gas giant diving before, so it is really cool to see! just recognizable enough in the "undersea" way, just foreign enough to keep you off-balance.
really cool work here -- super evocative name that everything in writing explores and expands upon.