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This could be a really interesting game. I would suggest that the input commands you expect, have it in the same order as what you have in the quest log. It took a LOT of "What am I supposed to type?" to figure out that it was the opposite order of words than the quest log.

I agree with Chuske. Or you could, instead of explore, have the first few tasks get the player to visit each of the sites one at a time, to force the explore a bit more while having a definitive task or try out the other elements like typing in the commands.

Good work overall! I did have fun.

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Thanks a lot! Really glad you had fun, this was just a small slice to test the vibe and get early feedback. A lot of systems will be changing. I really like the idea of guiding players more early on too,  definitely something I’ll explore more in the expanded version!