You're off to a good start. I do think the ending is a bit too abrupt, but I imagine that had more to do the time constraints than anything else. Keep up the good work I'd be interested to see where it goes.
Thanks for playing the game and for the comment! Yea, unfortunately I joined 3 days before submissions, so I didn't have a lot of time to flesh out the first memory box. Will update after the voting ends, with some bug fixes, qol and the first memory box!