This is a very thematic and eye-catching module with a lot of interesting ideas. I love the maps and the design and layout of all your art assets. As others have said, I think the text could benefit from some re-arranging for clarity - the content is great, it could just be easier to wrap your brain around. I like the inclusion of the TOMBS details; however, they take up a lot of space - you could communicate all that and more in a paragraph or two that incorporates that information narratively or on a timeline. In other words: show, don't tell. Let the reader gather that info as they piece together the scenario from reading your room descriptions and callouts. Overall a well-polished and tense module. Great work!
I appreciate having that reinforced. I think after the Jam concludes, I will revisit the way information is laid out in the pamphlet.
In future, I will reserve the TOMBS for my creature design documents, since it doesn't seem to add much for the space it occupies in the context of a scenario.
Thank you so much for taking the time to review it!